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Post by Maria DL GandaraA.Barros on 2008-03-04, 19:12

Scream



Scream the winds, the sky hears
the horror occurred on earth
the sky rain turn into tears
sufferings, that in men merge

Scream the Seas where the sands meets
the atrocities committed at high Seas
the sands content the waters beats
desiring entering land to eat

Scream The rivers to the forests
the pollution of man disorders rage
the forest cry is so honest!
when the fires destroy its foliage

Scream, Scream the planet Earth
to the Cosmo inertia in its help
I am getting destroy, I seek for help
suddenly a scream from the Universe

Your Salvation is the human race!


Maria


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Re: Scream

Post by Guest on 2008-03-05, 00:54

wowww
That is a fantastic "Scream" for sure Maria. Excellent poem about the earth sufering and all the things that Human does to the Green Planet. Needing more education for all those problems.

Great writing Maria Just Great!

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Re: Scream

Post by Philip G Bell on 2008-03-05, 16:59

I agree with Sofia. I also thought how well it would work with Edvard Munch's painting.

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Re: Scream

Post by Maria DL GandaraA.Barros on 2008-03-05, 18:01

Sofia Thanks so much for your comments
always appreciate it
Glad you like it
Love, Light and Sound
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Re: Scream

Post by Maria DL GandaraA.Barros on 2008-03-05, 18:02

Mr. Bell thank so much for your comment
I do not know Mr. Munch's Painting
as I have not seen them, but Always grateful
at your comments

Love, Light and Sound
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Re: Scream

Post by Philip G Bell on 2008-03-05, 19:16

It is quite famous - If you do a search on The Scream by Edvard Munch you will find many sites.

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Re: Scream

Post by Maria DL GandaraA.Barros on 2008-03-06, 22:21

Thanks Mr. Bell for the tip I did research the painter
and is shameful that the art work Scream was stolen
Grateful indeed
Love light and sound
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