Symetry - one of recently written poems

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Symetry - one of recently written poems

Post by Sonja on 2007-12-19, 12:33

Symmetry

You turned rivers to flow way back north,
and hurricanes into a refreshing gentle breeze,
you sent volcanoes down to earth's core
and falling leaves back to their trees.

You dressed me the white of cotton and silk
wishing to slowly undress me again,
telling me jokes till tears filled my eyes
and turning the Olympus for me to a glen.

Every day you gave me a new piece of sun
warm and bright seated onto my open palms,
every day a new sheet covered with words
as precious to me as the Book of David's psalms.
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Re: Symetry - one of recently written poems

Post by lanaia74 on 2007-12-20, 03:48

WOW! Brilliant simply brillint!

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Re: Symetry - one of recently written poems

Post by Guest on 2007-12-21, 08:29

loved the way you wrote it. The images/feelings...

Great work

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