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Ripe fruit - prepared for my new book of poetry

Post by Sonja on 2007-10-14, 01:20

Ripe fruit

Can you recall our childhood?
Do you remember quince jelly and mulberry taste,
Scents from the acacia tree and sitting down in its shade?...
You and I separated only with the thin fence of memories.

I was jumping the cord
and you were trying to impress me
just because you saw a nice butterfly.
I was dancing on my toes
and you were trying to whistle like a bird
and to bark like a dog.

We were both stealing fruits,
green apples and sweet dark cherries.

In my old shoes I was trying to walk like a movie star
while you were secretly going to the cinema.
I was playing accordion and singing,
you, just playing, to hide your teenage voice change.
I was dancing at my school,
you were looking at some other girls...

Can you recall our childhood?

We are here, again, you and I
connected with a new string,
you call me your love, your lady,
I call you my love, my lord,
now, we are walking the same lane.
Like two lost pages from the same book.



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Re: Ripe fruit - prepared for my new book of poetry

Post by Maria DL on 2007-10-14, 10:26

Awesome right and content Sonja
Wishing you luck with your upcoming
publications.

Love and Light

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Post by lanaia74 on 2007-10-23, 01:09

You are very talented! From what I see here your career is going sky rocket! Exceptional write!
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Post by hssoares on 2007-10-23, 19:25

What i am reading is absolutely wonderful

I must say it is a honor to read your work.

Wishing you all the best

Sofia

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Post by Philip G Bell on 2007-10-24, 00:47

Sonja this is simply wonderful. It even evoked memories of my own.

Philip

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Post by Sonja on 2007-10-24, 12:31

Maria DL GandaraA.Barros wrote:Awesome right and content Sonja
Wishing you luck with your upcoming
publications.

Love and Light

Maria Smile

Like a Star @ heaven Thank you Maria for good wishes and your time to read my poetry.

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Post by Sonja on 2007-10-24, 12:36

lanaia74 wrote:You are very talented! From what I see here your career is going sky rocket! Exceptional write!
Hugs,
Lanaia

Like a Star @ heaven Thanks Lanaia, you make me smile happy. I am glad that you like my poetical ways to express myself. I am mostly used to say "don't blame the poet..."

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Post by Sonja on 2007-10-24, 12:41

hssoares wrote:What i am reading is absolutely wonderful

I must say it is a honor to read your work.

Wishing you all the best

Sofia

Like a Star @ heaven Writing is a part of my life, even then when life is not so nice, but to share my poetry with other poets and friends is the special joy of mine.

Sonja


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Post by Sonja on 2007-10-24, 12:43

Philip G Bell wrote:Sonja this is simply wonderful. It even evoked memories of my own.

Philip

Like a Star @ heaven I am glad that you find a bit of your memories within my own lines.

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Post by lanaia74 on 2007-10-26, 02:51

Brilliantly written! All I can say is the kids of today, just wouldn't understand these memories, saying they were from way back when, it's sad in a way, because they will never know, what we have, especially before September 11th, when the whole world changed! Superb!
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Post by Sonja on 2007-10-27, 02:36

Thanks to all of you dear fellows and poets for so nice comments about my poetry.

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